Monday, October 27, 2008

hazmat suit


Sorry for the late posting.  I wanted to make it look a bit more badass for portfolio sake.  

2 comments:

scoro said...

Not a bad start.
Could use some more graphics, maybe on the boxes on his chest. Also think about how he might open those when he cannot see down to look at the buckles? Or are they for a team member to access? Try a version with the farside leg and arm darker and a darker BG. Shadow on ground will help him be in the enviro. Think about some seams in the suit? Stiches do not make sense as each is a hole. Look at some glued seams on wet weather gear made by Patagonia and others. Might tech it up a bit. Chest boxes look a little old school, like they are made of leather. Could they be abit more advanced? I like the wrinkled neck as it hints at mobitly. Angular part line on helmet feels odd with round forms of front of helmet. Knee pad feels a bit small, bump this up in size to make it feel more durable and functional. Base of pant leg needs to be integrated with the boots more. They look like urban jeans, they should not drag on the ground. Design a cool intregration of the boot and pant leg. Highlight-reflection lines on the lenses feel forced. Try putting glare over farside lens and letting us see his eye through the nearside lens. Farside tool needs a little detailing and tech up. Retain darker value graphic of glove on farside arm. Color for next week?

Jack Chang said...

Thanks Scot. I'll try my best to apply these suggestions and shoot for a color version next week. Hope you're having fun.